1.) The typical roof edge/curb condition
2.) The typical transition between the greenroof and the Media Labs
3.) The typical drainage condition, in particular where the drainage empties out into the collector below at the plaza level.

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The signature element that I will be focusing on for further detailed study
will be the greenroof/terraced rooftop gardens. This element is of
particular interest to me as it is a major part of my concept; The Green
Apple...
First, a little background on the value of a greenroof. In addition to being
aesthetically pleasing;
1.) They are comparable to other roof types when considering life cycle cost
2.) They are energy efficient, providing extra insulation in cold weather
and helping keep out heat in the warm weather
3.) They provide sound insulation
4.) They help preserve the roofing membrane
5.) They help retain and cleanse stormwater
6.) They provide usable space where there traditionally was none
(These benefits are from "Design Guidelines for Green Roofs" by Steven Peck
and Monica Kuhn)
The greenroof is an excellent step towards making better use of our
buildings where sustainability is concerned. Traditional roof construction
provides a horizontal plane to store rooftop equipment and hide "stink
pipes." It is a missed opportunity that can, and should, be taken advantage
of.
The most significant of the comments were a bit broader in scope and will
require deeper investigation to begin solving. They were, in no particular
order;
1.) The building presently feels as if it is two structures, one stacked
on top of the other. My main product floor, whose roof also serves as the
bottom level of the terraced garden, provides a visual break between the
lower two levels and the upper 3 as presently designed. This could be
validated, considering that the uses of the top 3 are significantly
different than the bottom 2, but I don't know if I want that break to be so
drastic. I originally foresaw the bottom levels (main floor, mezzanine
level, and level 2) as product and gathering spaces, whereas the top 3 were
to be destination points for field trips, computer labs, cyber café, and
teleconferencing type spaces. Some type of visual separation was intended
and acceptable, but I do not want it to be so overpowering that it
undermines the unity of the building. This will require additional
investigation.
2.) The placement of this building on Copley Square is an excellent
opportunity to engage the square that is not being fully realized by the
present design. There is the beginning of a relationship between the two,
but they are not nearly as connected as they could be. How can this be
rectified?
3.) A driving force behind the concept and the design is the "Green-ness"
of the building. The blurring of the transition between the interior and
exterior is a start, but there is so much more to being a green building
than just having plants and water inside. I will definitely need to further
study the arrangement of the spaces and anticipate the daylighting
characteristics of the building. Am I getting the right kind of sun where I
want it when I need it? Conversely, am I getting the wrong kind of sun where
I don't want it, when I don't need it? It isn't enough just to have it
looking green, it has to BE green for this concept to be realized.
Additionally, there was discussion as to where the break should take place
between the interior and exterior. Should the water feature/seating plaza,
which now spans both the interior and exterior, be fully enclosed in some
type of glass "nana-wall" which can be opened when the weather permits? This
would allow for year round use of the space.
It was also suggested that I may want to look at the buildings relationship
with the alley to its rear. The design presently is completely closed off to
the alley and, at this point, I can't really see any reason to change that.
The alley is not very desirable and I don't choose to engage it. Rather, I
am interested in encouraging the relationship with Copley square to the
front of the building. The alley serves as a decent opportunity to handle
services, i.e. shipping, receiving, waste disposal, etc. without making it a
focal point.
In closing, the comments were all very helpful, from the minute details that
some addressed to the more big picture issues. I will undoubtedly be doing
my best to address them as I move forward with the design.
Message? understand how the space is used or youre wasting everybodys time.. Brilliant...
My first reaction, as you can most likely tell, took a defensive
tone....."What, the built environment the problem??? The hell you say!!!"
While I stand by my initial post, I choose to take a different approach this
time around.....Now that I have had some more time to ponder the issue....
My initial post portrayed Architects as "homo faber," or "man the
maker".....Designer as craftsman, with little obligation beyond the
craft......service providers, not policy makers.......
If nothing else, from a design standpoint, Bickford's writing at least makes
me think about whether or not it should be that way, and how we can change
it.....How can I take advantage of the opportunities that I will be given to
impact the built environment for the greater good?? How can I make sure that
every project I come in contact with can be more than a "solution to a
problem??"....... How can I inject my sense of Design citizenship into my
designs and, all corny-ness aside, make the world a better place????
The first step is becoming aware of the issue....accepting that this
profession, should it choose, can make a difference, for better or worse,
where the greater good is concerned.... We can help define the problems
instead of just trying to solve them...
It's a start...........
Not long after beginning my analysis, it became evident to me that there is
one constant in each of the screen shots.......the viewer....me...I am the
constant to every image I reviewed...the scenery, colors, lighting, and
camera angle, all change, even if only subtly, from shot to shot, but I
remain.
Something else that is ever changing is the relationship between the viewer
and the view...Sometimes I am invited into the view, and sometimes I am
excluded from it.....sometimes it lets me quietly observe what transpires
below, and sometimes it simply desires to please my sense of
vision....characteristics of the view will dictate the viewers relationship
and response to it.
These are the themes that I discovered and will serve as the basis of my
diagrams to follow soon.....
Okay, so where was I......Oh yes, Susan Bickfords "Constructing
Inequality".......forgive me for oversimplifying Ms. Bickford's thesis, but
I have a tendency to do that sometimes.....my conclusion after finishing the
paper, is that the author 1.) has had a bad experience with either a gated
community, or the ghetto, or a downtown somewhere, or all of these, and/or
2.) misunderstands the role that the built environment plays in our
society....... Let me expound upon the latter.
Design is produced by the designer........it is the tangible solution to
some 3-dimensional problem......now there are better solutions, and worse
solutions, judged by a whole host of factors, most importantly how "well"
the problem has been addressed......My point here is that design is a
REFLECTION of society's percieved wants and needs........should I work on
designing a "bum friendly" park bench???? Or maybe a "bag-lady friendly"
enclosure around a restaurant dumpster??? Of course not, (unless it is in
the program, because then I want the bum friendliest bench on the
planet).......I do this so I do not encourage bums to sleep on these benches
or frequent these enclosures.....I design gates around communities because,
like it or not, some people want to live inside a community that is
protected by a gate........does that mean that I think societies treatment
of the homeless is what it should be, or that I want to run out and by a
home in a gated community???....not at all.....what it does mean however is
that I think that author is inaccurate of her portrayal of the space/society
relationship when she states, "space and society are more interactive than
that, more mutually constitutive."........Yes the built environment can
evoke emotions and reactions....you may even say manipulate
behavior.......but the fact is that, just like the presence of mall security
is a reaction to a cause (namely theft), the built environment is a reaction
to a cause (namely, the percieved wants and needs of its
inhabitants)........
Now, all of this being said, bad design is bad design.....plain and
simple.......ever since residential design fell predominately in the hands
of builders and developers post-depression, and suburbia was born post WWII,
a general decline in quality of homes and neighborhoods has been pretty
evident......likewise, without some real effort on the part of the decision
makers, how can anyone really expect low income housing to feel like
anything less than that?? There is always the opportunity for designers to
create better places, and interject more socially responsible solutions as
we are able....but in the end, our solutions are problem driven........and
if people want to live in gated communities, and municipalities want to get
low income housing for as cheap as possible, and town managers don't want to
encourage the homeless to take up residence in their parks, we as the
designers will continue to come up with the best possible solutions for the
problems that they present to us......the authors contentions are societal
problems, brought to light by design, but by no means attributed to it....
Lastly, if the United States can be considered a successful democracy, and
be made up of multiple states, and each state can be made up of multiple
municipalities, why can't each municipality be made up of smaller
communities and neighborhoods of likeminded individuals? Ethnocentricism, as
I understand it, is a normal social condition.........as long as we all
remember that, in a democracy, our allegiance lies with the greater
community as a whole......
And, in the immortal words of Forrest Gump....."That's all I have to say
about that"..................
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